Category: Short Fiction

2026 is another year of short stories. In this weekly series, I track my short story writing, from idea and draft to submission.

This is the week of Aug 31 – Sept 6.

Stats

• Stories Finished: 3
• Submissions Currently Out: 11
• Submissions Total: 35
• Rejections: 26
• Acceptances: 0

Submissions and Responses

I received two form rejections this week, for Red Eye and Taco Cat. One of these was from Clarkesworld, which I submitted to because I knew I could be confident that I’d get a response within a week and be able to send to another publication with a relatively near-term deadline. I honestly don’t understand how Clarkesworld can pay pro rates and still respond to the onslaught of submissions so quickly, but I do appreciate it.

I ended up sending two new submissions for Red Eye and another for Taco Cat. If nothing else, I am keeping my stories circulating.

Goals

My goals from last week:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Hit writing/editing quotas every day.

Critiques have been going well. My horror story, The Magpie, is set to go out to the Critters in two weeks, and I hope to have it ready for submission in early October.

Writing quotas have not been going particularly well. I mentioned that I would be working on editing T.I.M. and writing Arbor Grove. What I really ended up doing was stepping back and thinking about process.

Considering a Writing Reset

Life is busy, and I struggle to write during the week. Even when I have time, I rarely have the energy. Part of this is my own fault. Like many people in the modern world, I have terrible sleep habits. I’m usually progressively more sleep deprived as the week goes on. That leaves me in a half-zombie state where I don’t feel up to creative work like writing, so I end up doomscrolling or watching garbage on streaming services. That leads to staying up too late again…and so on. A vicious cycle. That’s certainly something I need to address for my quality of life.

I’ve also been facing some roadblocks with my current batch of stories. T.I.M. is a story that has been through an unusual amount of revision for me, and has a completed draft. Unfortunately, I decided this week that it needs to go back into the trunk for now. There is some spark missing from it, and I think that doing justice to the main character will require some research to really get into the POV. I plan to do that, but it means the story won’t be ready anytime soon. The other story I’ve been working on, Arbor Grove, is a loose collection of ideas and scenes that I haven’t quite found my way into yet.

The whole Year of Short Stories thing has been great for my submission rate and overall productivity, but it has also made me more myopic. I’ve been focusing on getting the current  work done and out the door, and probably not thinking as much as I should about what the current work should be, or how I should be doing it.

So, I’m going to take this next week to think about process. How can I get more writing done with less stress, and what should I be working on as we enter the final third of the year?

Next Week

Goals:

• Keep up with critiques
• Think about process

2026 is another year of short stories. In this weekly series, I track my short story writing, from idea and draft to submission.

These are the weeks of Aug 16 – Aug 30.

Stats

• Stories Finished: 3
• Submissions Currently Out: 10
• Submissions Total: 32
• Rejections: 24
• Acceptances: 0

Submissions and Responses

Two stories came back this week with form rejections: Dr. Clipboard and Red Eye. The Red Eye response was a whopping 180 days, but this is just the price you pay when submitting a story over 6000 words.

With Dr. Clipboard free of its “no simultaneous submissions” shackles, I submitted it to two less monogamous publications. Red Eye is not so lucky; most publications that take longer stories (and actually pay) like to be exclusive.

Goals

My goals from last week:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Hit writing/editing quotas every day.

This was a change of pace from more specific “get X done” goals that I’ve been doing, to pure numbers. Ironically, I didn’t quite keep up with my quotas, but I did get the draft of Estate Sale edited to my satisfaction, and submitted to the Critters critique queue. I also gave it a new name: The Magpie. I’m still not sure this is the final title, but it’s the working one for now.

Next Week

I’m going to keep the same goals for next week, but my intent is to work on cleaning up T.I.M. for critique and write some new words on Arbor Grove.

2026 is another year of short stories. In this weekly series, I track my short story writing, from idea and draft to submission.

This is the week of Aug 10 – Aug 16.

Stats

• Stories Finished: 3
• Submissions Currently Out: 9
• Submissions Total: 29
• Rejections: 22
• Acceptances: 0

Submissions and Responses

One form rejection this week, for Taco Cat. I still have one other submission out for this story, but I may look for more places to send it.

Goals

My goals from last week:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Finish Estate Sale revisions and submit for critique

I am back in the swing of doing a critique per week, so that’s an easy box to check.

I worked on Estate Sale, but it’s still not ready yet. I’m thinking about better titles, with Magpie being the current frontrunner. Ideally, I’d prefer something with a little more malice for a horror story.

Learn, Learn Again

I often find that many of my difficulties in life are self-inflicted. Few things are more irritating than thinking I’ve learned a lesson, only to realize some time later that I failed to internalize it and slid back into old behaviors.

I started this year with daily quotas for words written and revision per day, and my intent was to try to actually hit those numbers each day instead of cramming all of my writing time into the weekends. The quotas are small: 100 words and ten minutes, so they’re not hard to meet and it’s possible to catch up from missed days.

Now it’s August, and I find that I’ve slipped into old habits. I only write on the weekends, I have been revising with little new work, and my word count is weeks behind. I instinctively reach for the usual excuses: end of summer busyness and the imminent return of school, work, and my indie game project. Plus, it’s so hard to come home from work, cook dinner, do chores, and then find energy for writing, right? Never mind the folks in significantly harder circumstances who somehow find the time to bang out fine literature.

So, with that ritual self-flagellation out of the way, I’m going to try to relearn my lesson this week, and meet my quotas every day.

The Times, They Are A-Changin’

I’ll also mention that I think it’s a very interesting time to be a writer, and I mean that both literally and as the faux Chinese curse.

I’ve been reading quite a bit lately about the direct and indirect effects of AI on writing and publishing. Fiction, like everything involving written words, is in the midst of major disruptions, and these come on the heels of the e-book and self-publishing revolutions that have already caused major upheavals and consolidation of power in the industry. There are  more ways to publish work than there ever have been, though it’s still not easy (and maybe getting harder) to be paid to do so.

Scandals around allegedly AI-written books are making it into the general news cycle, but I suspect short fiction is feeling the impact far more, if only because of sheer accessibility of submissions and comparatively lower effort. I’ll have a post or two on these topics in the near future.

Next Week

Goals:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Hit writing/editing quotas every day.

2026 is another year of short stories. In this weekly series, I track my short story writing, from idea and draft to submission.

This is the week of Aug 2 – Aug 9.

Stats

• Stories Finished: 3
• Submissions Currently Out: 10
• Submissions Total: 29
• Rejections: 21
• Acceptances: 0

Submissions and Responses

No new submissions or responses this week.

Goals

My goals from last week:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Revise Estate Sale
3. If time and energy allow – review T.I.M.

After last week’s reset, I’ve been blasting through critiques to get ahead of the game. Now I just need a story to put in the queue.

On that front, I worked on revisions for both T.I.M. and Estate Sale. This was the first time I’ve read through T.I.M. since the major rewrite, and since it has been a few weeks, I felt like I could give it an honest look. It was better than I thought it might be. The main problem is that it’s now 6000 words, and I’d like to really trim that down. It also has a weak ending that will need to be improved.

Estate Sale feels closer to done, but I’m going to try a new revision technique with it.

Externalizing The Inner Critic

The idea I’m going to try is pretty simple. Now that I have the story in a pretty good place, I’m looking at it, pretending I’m a critiquer, and trying to anticipate where the critiques might complain about the story.

The reason I’m doing this is because I have had a couple cases recently where I managed to convince myself that a niggling problem with a story is not a big deal, only to have critiques come back and call out exactly that problem.

Now, sometimes fellow writers will critique a story, and it’s clear that they want to make it the kind of story they like, rather than the best version of the story you want to tell. I try to avoid this when I’m critiquing. So it’s still important to not water down the story in hopes of making it “something lots of readers will like.”

I suppose I’m just trying a new tactic to try to separate my critical brain from my writing brain for editing.

Next Week

Goals:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Finish Estate Sale revisions and submit for critique

2026 is another year of short stories. In this weekly series, I track my short story writing, from idea and draft to submission.

This is the week of Jul 27 – Aug 2.

Stats

• Stories Finished: 3
• Submissions Currently Out: 10
• Submissions Total: 29
• Rejections: 21
• Acceptances: 0

Submissions and Responses

The only response I received this week was a single form rejection—the very first for my new story, Beneath the House at Caen. I’m never looking for a rejection, but I do appreciate a publication with a quick turnaround on submissions. Now Caen feels “broken-in.”

I scoured the listings and sent out three more submissions this week, bringing my total in flight up to a healthy ten. Trying to find publications for Red Eye and Taco Cat once again drove home the challenge of selling a 6700-word story vs. selling a 1000-word story. Even though 1000 words is too short for a few publications, there are still far more listings than for the long story. Not only that, but the places that do take longer stories trend toward the bigger, older publications, and they often reply very slowly and don’t like simultaneous submissions, making the process even more arduous.

Remember kids, you have to write what feels right to you, but size does matter when it comes time to actually sell that story.

Goals

My goals carried over from the previous week:

1. Submit stories
2. Catch up on critiques
3. Clean up and trim T.I.M.
4. Other revisions: Estate Sale?

With the additional story submission this week, I’m in pretty good shape. Now I’m just keeping my eyes open for opportunities to submit Red Eye and waiting for responses.

I also reviewed my Critters admin panel and found that I was far enough behind to warrant a ratio reset. I’ll be working on a couple critiques this week to get myself back in the critique gods’ good graces.

I’m still not quite ready to come back to T.I.M., so I worked on revising Estate Sale this week. Having let it sit for a while and come back, I found it fairly readable. I don’t think this one will need too much more work, at least until I get some reader feedback.

Next week, the goals get a little shuffle.

Next Week

Goals:

1. Keep up with critiques
2. Revise Estate Sale
3. If time and energy allow – review T.I.M.