2026 is another year of short stories. In this weekly series, I track my short story writing, from idea and draft to submission.
This is the week of Aug 2 – Aug 9.
Stats
- Stories Finished: 3
- Submissions Currently Out: 10
- Submissions Total: 29
- Rejections: 21
- Acceptances: 0
Submissions and Responses
No new submissions or responses this week.
Goals
My goals from last week:
- Keep up with critiques
- Revise Estate Sale
- If time and energy allow – review T.I.M.
After last week’s reset, I’ve been blasting through critiques to get ahead of the game. Now I just need a story to put in the queue.
On that front, I worked on revisions for both T.I.M. and Estate Sale. This was the first time I’ve read through T.I.M. since the major rewrite, and since it has been a few weeks, I felt like I could give it an honest look. It was better than I thought it might be. The main problem is that it’s now 6000 words, and I’d like to really trim that down. It also has a weak ending that will need to be improved.
Estate Sale feels closer to done, but I’m going to try a new revision technique with it.
Externalizing The Inner Critic
The idea I’m going to try is pretty simple. Now that I have the story in a pretty good place, I’m looking at it, pretending I’m a critiquer, and trying to anticipate where the critiques might complain about the story.
The reason I’m doing this is because I have had a couple cases recently where I managed to convince myself that a niggling problem with a story is not a big deal, only to have critiques come back and call out exactly that problem.
Now, sometimes fellow writers will critique a story, and it’s clear that they want to make it the kind of story they like, rather than the best version of the story you want to tell. I try to avoid this when I’m critiquing. So it’s still important to not water down the story in hopes of making it “something lots of readers will like.”
I suppose I’m just trying a new tactic to try to separate my critical brain from my writing brain for editing.
Next Week
Goals:
- Keep up with critiques
- Finish Estate Sale revisions and submit for critique